The Great Gatsby Essay Reflection

Whenever we were reading our peers essays, I read one of my peers’ that had sort of the same concept as mine, but she included points that I had not thought about. She included the concept of corruption within the characters and that’s a point of view I didn’t consider in my writing of the argument essay. I interpreted my essay by focusing on the idea of obtaining a luxurious life and the American Dream. What makes me feel proud of my essay is how mature it sounds. I really tried to make it sound sophisticated and in depth of my argument. What I would do differently next time would gather more evidence to back up my argument to make it stronger.